Monday, October 27, 2008

Socratic Seminar and my future . . . they're related?!?!?!

Okay so our class has big issues with having everyone being involved with our discussions. Mr. Dye asked us how could we make it so EVERYONE participated in our discussions. I personally think that the reason only five people in our whole class comment is because no one else has any motivation to comment. They think "So what? What does this have to do with my life? Why should I care?" so they just stay silent and bored.
It's really your decision to comment or not, but the thing is, if you ask questions and add the conversation and THINK then you'll learn more. You just have to look within yourself and say "Okay, what do I want to be when I grow up?". I'll just use myself as an example for this because we already talked about it, so I want to be an oceanographer (underwater photographer). How in the world does Socratic Seminar help me with that? At first, most people would think, absolutely nothing. It seems completely irrelevant at first glance, but in reality it's not. It's completely relevant. How? It's all about point of view.
The photography world is very competitive and if you want to be that one famous photographer for National Geographic out of the hundreds of people that applied then you're going to have to be unique. You're going to have to show them that you can take a picture of an angle fish in a point of view that's never been taken before. Amazingly, Socratic Seminar can help you with establishing that point of view. You have to figure out how that picture relates to history, and you can't do that without knowing your history, right?
So next time you're in class and decide that the bell write has nothing to do with you and it just bores you to death, think harder. Do something different. THINK. Comment! Find out how what you're learning now relates to what you want to be when you grow up! You'll be surprised at exactly HOW relevant it is.

Sunday, October 26, 2008

Value of reading the Canterbury Tales in class

Mr. Dye presents an interesting question: what is the value of reading the Canterbury Tales? I think that reading them isn't absolutely nessicary but is a good idea. They give us a good glimps into the middle ages and shows us that people back then really weren't that different then the people in the world today. I think if we read all the tales then we would find that we all could relate to at least one person.
Then there's the whole point that hardly anything was written about women or from them during that time period. We know hardly anything about the life of women back then and it's very interesting to read something from a woman's point of view because back then it was so rare.
Then there's the question of whether or not his class should read the Tales next year. I personally do not have an oppinion, but what do all you think? Should Mr. Dye make the students next year read the Canterbury Tales?

Saturday, October 11, 2008

A riddle

Okay so I have no idea what to write for my second post this week so I decided I'd put a riddle on my blog for my second post for you all to puzzle over.

Brad stared through the dirty soot-smeared window on the 22nd floor of the office tower. Overcome with depression he slid the window open and jumped through it. It was a sheer drop outside the building to the ground. Miraculously after he landed he was completely unhurt. Since there was nothing to cushion his fall or slow his descent, how could he have survived the fall?

Friday, October 10, 2008

A poem

Silence.
Night.
Pain.
Devour me.
Breathing gets
Harder.
Shallower.
Faster.
A searching heart pounding in
My ears.
My blood.
My Head.
Black tears
T
R
I
C
K
L
E
Down my face.
Burning.
Staining.
Stinging.
Leaving their mark on my pillow.
RED.
Everywhere.
THEN.
. . . His beautiful face . . .
. . . His heady scent . . .
. . . His intoxicating kiss . . .
. . . His mouth-watering taste . . .
. . . His fire-velvet touch . . .
I wish . . .



ps- if this poem doesn't make any sence go to this link and hopefully you'll get a better idea! thanks!

http://celieshottspace.spaces.live.com/blog/cns!371B661622607D96!371.entry#trackback

Sunday, October 5, 2008

Peter Pan From Wendy's POV (chapter 4)

“We’re home Lost Boys!” cried Peter as we descended down the dark wooden staircase.
“Wendy! Peter!” Michael ran to us and hugged us. “Guess what? One of the lost boys told me that one time he was almost eaten by a bear!” he exclaimed.
“Oh wow that’s scary!” I said, tousling his hair gently and smiling. “Sounds like you boys had fun while we were gone!”
“Yea! I’m gonna be an Indian when I grow up! Aoowaahhhhhyayayaya!” Michael ran around the room with two fingers behind his head with one hand and his other hand patting his mouth. The rest of the boys joined in with him, mimicking him.
“Alright that’s enough boys! I’m gonna go hunt a meal down for dinner! I’ll be back soon and when I do I’ll tell you all about it!” Peter shouted.
“Get a Humbalick, those taste the best in the world and they’re the most fun to catch!” One of the lost boys said, I didn’t know which.
“Oh yea!” Peter exclaimed. His eyes lit up and he sprinted out of the room.
“But what’s a . . .” I shouted after him, but I was too late. I shook my head and forgot about it. I guess I was going to find out. This land was so strange. I didn’t think I’d ever get used to it, but I guess I had forever right? I frowned as I thought about that. It reminded me of the conversation I had had with Peter in the fairies’ land, and I didn’t want to think about that at the moment.
“Wendy? Will you tell us a story? John and Michael told us that you tell the best stories in the world!” a small boy, no older than 6 years old, tugged on my nightgown as he asked this.
I looked at my two younger brothers and rolled my eyes. “Yes. I’ll tell you a story, but all you boys have to sit down and be quiet alright?”
The boys all immediately sat down where they were standing and looked at me with wide eyes. The room went silent.
I decided to tell them the story about Cinderella. I concentrated and got into the right kind of mood that I reserved for story telling. The mood made the stories come to life.
“Once apon a time . . .”

“. . . The clock struck midnight and Cinderella ran, leaving a glass slipper . . .” I recited.
“Wendy. I need to talk to you.” I jumped when I heard Peter’s voice behind me.
I turned around to face him. He had a frown on his face and his eyes were tight. “What’s wrong?” I asked, startled.
“Something’s not right. Come with me. Now.” He said with a serious tone.
“Um . . . Okay?” I said with a confused expression as Peter grabbed my hand and pulled me up the staircase and into the forest night.
We ran through the forest, though it was so dark I wondered how we weren’t running into the strange trees. We sprinted blindly for about 5 minutes with Peter dragging me behind him but then I started to get tired.
“Wait!” I stopped, crouched down, and put my hands on my knees, breathing heavily. “What. Is. Going. On?”
Peter glared at me in the moonlight. “We’re in trouble. There’s a Wangdoodle after you. He wants you as a slave.”
“What? What’s a Wangdoodle? A slave for what? Peter! What’s going on?! I’m scared!” I said, my words tripping over one another.
Peter rolled his eyes as if this was the most simple concept in the world. “We have to get you to safety Wendy! We have to go now! He’ll use you as a slave to tell him stories and somehow turn them against everything in Never Land! He’s always trying to take over Never Land, and you’re the key to his next master plan. While I was out hunting for the Humbalick I over-heard some of his other servants talking . . . Ugh we need to go now!” He grabbed my arm roughly and started running with me again. The look he gave me was so black that I didn’t argue farther.
We sprinted through more black trees until finally we reached a beautiful pool, clear as glass.
The pool was beautiful. It was completely smooth and the moon and stars reflected on the surface.
Suddenly, I was my head was in a daze and I started walking towards the black water.
“That’s right. Go to the water.” Peter crooned behind me, but I wasn’t listening. I was fixated with the reflection of the red moon at the far side of the pool.
My feet approached the edge of the water and I started into the pool. The water was warm and compelled me even more.
I descended down, the water getting higher up my body with each step I took, then I felt a hand grab my ankle but the only thing that mattered to me at the moment was the red moon.
I kept on walking towards my destination and another hand grabbed my other ankle. The hands were moving with my feet, keeping a tight grip on them, and then when the water got to my neck the hands pulled me under.
I screamed and closed my eyes, startled. I was surprised when I found that I was able to breathe, even under the water.
I opened my eyes and was yet again surprised that I was also able to see perfectly.
Something slimy was tied around my wrists and ankles. I looked down to see what it was and it looked like some sort of sea weed like in my own world, but just a little different.
The sea weed like rope was super strong and extremely long. I struggled against it but realized that I couldn’t move.
I looked at my surroundings and saw nothing but millions and millions of the sea weed like things.
I wondered how I got down here, for my head was now crystal clear, and then I remembered everything.
Peter.
Oh no. I remembered something I had passed off as my imagination. That distinct symbol, the one that I thought I would never have any need for.
The shape shifters.
I remembered seeing that mark on the bottom of one of Peter’s feet when we were running. At first I had thought it was just a scar of some sort but now that I thought about it, I now realized that it was the exact same symbol that Peter had drawn in the ground this morning.
No.
Did this mean Peter was a shape shifter? Or did it just mean that there was a shape shifter who had molded himself to look like Peter?
I remembered the black expression on Peter’s face just before he had taken me to this place, then I remembered the look on his face after I’d kissed him. I compared the two memories in my head side by side. They looked nothing alike.
The Peter who had trapped me here was surely a shape shifter. That made me feel better. All I wanted was for the boys and Peter to be safe, and nothing else mattered.
Then everything went black. . .

Gunpowder Or The Printing Press?

Okay so the Chinese invented two very powerful things: gunpowder, and the printing press. The question is, which one is more important or had a greater influence or whatever? I personally think that gunpowder is a lot more important. Without gunpowder we wouldn't have invented the very first guns and then those guns would have never lead to later modern day weapons, which we would basicaly be nothing without in war. The printing press is also very important, i just think that gunpowder is more important.

Thursday, September 25, 2008

My childhood neighborhood

This story is inspired by today's journal writing prompt:

When I lived in my old house I had crazy neighbors. The family consisted of an over-protective mother, a crazy father, a cute little 3 year old blond boy, and the devil child. Nine year old Madaline. She was a violent little thing. She beat up her adorable little brother when ever she got the chance, which was almost always, and got away with it. Her mother thought she was a harmless little angle and everyone beat up on her, little did she know that everyone hated the little monster because she was always very rude to all the other children she played with and hit them and such when she didn't get her way. One day Madaline came over to our house to play with my little sisters. After a while I went to the back yard to check on the kids and to tell Madaline to go home. When I found her she was riding one of our scooters and when I told her it was time for her to go home she got angry at me because she wanted to say and started swinging the metal scooter at me. I dodged her attacks, but then she decided to put down the scooter and throw rocks at me. When I saw what she planned to do I just ran as fast as I could into my house to tell my parents that the devil child was after me. When my parents intervened she was then sent home finally and I survived the experience. Thank heavens for that! (Ha ha just kidding - I'm being dramatic even though this really happened to me when I was like 12 years old)

Peter Pan from Wendy's POV (chapter 3)

Chapter 3:

I was temporarily blinded by the sun while my eyes adjusted. Peter was still holding my hand and I looked up at him, confused. “Where are we going?” I asked, a little annoyed.
“Oh you’ll see!” Peter smiled impishly and started running and dragging me with him and a stumbled along behind him.
We ran outside the curtain of leaves and onto the moss, running the opposite way we had come; through the trees and into a small clearing with a flat square stone in the center.
He stopped running and led me to the stone. It was so smooth it looked to be glass.
I gaped when I saw him sit on the glass-like white rock. I thought it would break under his weight.
When Peter saw the look on my face he just smiled at me in encouragement. “It’s okay. Do you trust me?”
“Yea, I guess I’m just a little scared. All this, this beautiful place and you . . . it all seems so unreal” I said in awe.
“You don’t have to be afraid. There’s nothing to be afraid of. Nothing will attack you while I’m with you. I have a reputation for keeping the bad guys away. They won’t get to me. Not now, not ever.” He said cockily. “Besides, where we’re going bad things don’t exist, they can’t, and if they try they just die. So you see? There’s nothing to worry about Wendy.” He smiled at me and his eyes sparkled.
I could tell he was anxious to show me whatever it was he wanted to share with me. I stepped on the stone and sat Indian-style across from Peter.
“Now take both of my hands and close your eyes.” He said quietly. I took his hands slowly, cautiously, and closed my eyes.
Suddenly I felt like I was falling. My eyes flew open and I let out a little scream.
Everything was white.
Off in the distance I saw a bright blue light getting bigger and bigger. What ever the blue light was, it was getting closer and closer to us.
I clutched Peter to me, afraid of what was coming at us so quickly, and hid my face in his shoulder.
“Shh . . . it’s alright. They’re just light fairies. Completely harmless. Look, they’re beautiful.” He stroked my long brown hair and cupped his hand under my chin.
When I opened my eyes we were surrounded by child-sized beings with wings fluttering too quickly to follow. Every single one of them had white-blond hair and pale blue eyes. Their skin glowed a brilliant blue light.
The scene behind us was jade green ferns and jungle-like trees. Everything sparkled, though there was no sun.
It was a perfect temperature and I could hear something that sounded like singing off in the background. I wondered where it was coming from.
Peter was right. They were beautiful. I wished I could look like that. I wished that I could fly.
“Well? What do you think?” Peter said, snapping me out of my reverie.
“It’s absolutely beautiful. Thank you so much for showing me this, but why . . .” I crumpled up my face in confusion. I still didn’t understand the reason for him bringing me here.
“I just wanted to show you the best part of Never Land so that maybe it would be more likely for you to stay . . .” Peter looked down at his feet.
“What? Stay? Are you serious? We can’t stay here. We have to go back to our mother and father! We can’t just leave them at home! They’re probably worried sick!” I started panicking as this reality hit me like a shock-wave. “It was a stupid idea to come here in the first place! I can’t believe I let myself do this . . . and Michael and John . . . Oh no! What have I done?” I was hyperventilating, talking so fast that I could barely understand my own words.
“Calm down Wendy! Time stops in your world while we’re in Never Land. You have nothing to worry about. Besides, if you stay here you’ll never have to grow up and you can be a kid forever! Wouldn’t that be wonderful? We could have fun all the time and we’d never have to worry about anything!” Peter said, passionate, and then his tone changed and got gentler. “I don’t want to loose you. It’s better here with you. You can help me take care of the lost boys and tell those stories about Cinderella and Snow White . . . they really like stories. I need you. We all need you.” He touched my face lightly.
My heart was pounding in my chest. It felt like it was about to burst. I wanted to lean in and kiss him, like I had read about in my story books a million times over. Which surprised me. I had never felt like this before, but I liked it. I never wanted this moment to end. It seemed like I was in one of my books right now. It was so unreal.
I closed my eyes and touched my lips lightly, it only lasted a second, but that second seemed like an eternity to me.
I leaned back to look at how he had reacted. His face wore some emotion unfathomable to me but then slowly stretched into a smile. I smiled back at him sheepishly and looked down. I could feel my cheeks burning fire.
“Close your eyes.” Peter murmured. We started floating up and everything went white again . . .

Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Meant To Live

These are the lyrics to a song by Switchfoot called "Meant To live". I think alot of us can relate to these lyrics, not that I can myself right at the moment because I've having a totaly different problem, but yea. What do they mean to you? Please comment.

Fumbling his confidence
And wond’ring why the world has passed him by
Hoping that he’s meant for more than arguments
And failed attempts to fly, fly

We were meant to live for so much more
Have we lost ourselves?
Somewhere we live inside
Somewhere we live inside
We were meant to live for so much more
Have we lost ourselves?
Somewhere we live inside

Dreaming about providence
And whether mice or men have second tries
Maybe we’ve been livin with our eyes half open
Maybe we’re bent and broken, broken

We were meant to live for so much more
Have we lost ourselves?
Somewhere we live inside
Somewhere we live inside
We were meant to live for so much more
Have we lost ourselves?
Somewhere we live inside

We want more than this world’s got to offer
We want more than this world’s got to offer
We want more than the wars of our fathers
And everything inside screams for second life

We were meant to live for so much more
Have we lost ourselves?
We were meant to live for so much more
Have we lost ourselves?
We were meant to live for so much more
Have we lost ourselves?
We were meant to live
We were meant to live

The Koran

Today we had a discussion in class about the Koran. We taked about whether or not it's right for students to read the Muslim's holly book in school. My oppinion on the subject is this: I think it is absolutely right for students to read it, especially in today's world where practically everyone is afraid of Muslims because of what happened on 9/11. It can help us understand the culture better and help us get more out of our own religion. It can make us less bigated, pridefull, and racist which, in my oppinion, are all bad characteristics and are all big problems in today's world. We need to understand Muslims so we don't put a blanket punishment on them and discriminate them from anyone else.
There was a concern voiced in class by someone that reading the Koran could convert you to Islam and how that would cause problems. I really don't think that reading the Koran could just convert you to Islam. I'm not saying it's not possible, but that it's highly unprobable. First of all, we're not even reading the whole thing, and second of all, if you by some small chance were to convert to Islam just because you read the Koran then you probably aren't very strong in your own religion (which wouldn't make any sense concidering that the reason you wouldn't want to read it in the first place was because you're strong in your religion). So basically, in my oppinion, this really wouldn't be a problem.
Anyways, that's my oppinion. Please comment. Thanks!

Tuesday, September 9, 2008

Peter Pan from Wendy's POV (chapter 2)

Chapter 2:

“Okay, this is what you have to do. Close your eyes and be completely silent.” he said as we all followed his instructions. “Now, do you feel something in the air? Something that feels all tingley and staticy? Something that feels like magic?” he whispered dramatically.
My heart beat loudly in my ears as he described the exact feeling I was having earlier.
“All you have to do is feel it and let it lift you up into the air. Believe that it can make you fly!” he said with an almost reverenced tone.
I felt it! What a strange feeling. I didn’t want to let it go. I wanted to embrace it . . . this, this magic . . . what ever it was, it felt amazing. The wind started to blow harder and whip around us like an invisible raging tornado. I tried to move, but I couldn’t.
“Don’t fight against it!” Peter yelled above the wind.
My bare feet left the bedroom floor for a moment then touched back down on the ground, only I could tell we were somewhere different.
The wind died down and I could suddenly move again. I opened my eyes and found myself staring at the most beautiful lake and waterfall I’d ever seen.
The sunlight reflected off the deep blue water and came back as sparkles. The lake was a perfect round circle and the waterfall seemed to be coming from the clouds.
Brilliant rainbows were coming from the mist that was made from where the waterfall hit the lake.
I looked down and saw millions of the most beautiful, unique wildflowers I’d ever seen.
The lush green grass was velvet beneath my feet.
There were trees in a perfect half circle, stopping at the face of the cliff that the waterfall was on. The trees all looked to be the same kind of tree, ones with metallic brownish bluish trunks and branches, and dark green leaves with the same strange metallic characteristic. They were so beautiful. I wanted to touch one.
There was a flowery smell in the air, but I couldn’t put a name to it. It smelled like nothing I had ever smelled before.
I could hear the faint bubbling of a stream somewhere, hiding in the wild flowers.
“Where are we?” I asked as I was taking this all in. I was so engrossed with the scene around me that I didn’t notice Peter standing right behind me.
He leaned his face over my shoulder and whispered in my ear “Never Land”.
I jumped and automatically moved my face towards his voice. I looked at him with wild eyes; his face inches from mine and just stared at his expression. He had that same mischievous smile and humor in his eyes. Then he jumped back and laughed.
His laugh startled me. It was so happy, like he had never had any pain in his life, ever. How strange.
“Let’s go and meet the lost boys!” he shouted and started walking towards the strange trees. We all exchanged puzzled looks but agreed to follow.
We had been walking through the trees most of the day but it was all either downhill or flat. I watched as the trees progressively changed color; from blue, to green, to purple, to red, to pink, and back again, all with the same strange metallic tinge. I silently wondered why that was.
Peter was talking cheerily through the whole long walk, talking about his strange little family of ten boys and all the adventures he had had with them. He told us what kind of creatures to avoid and what kind that was fine to be around and about what they looked like.
He twisted around and startled us when his voice suddenly turned intense. “. . . And most of all stay away from the shape shifters! They’re the most dangerous of all the creatures to avoid. They can make themselves look like anything or anyone they want to and deceive you perfectly into making you think that they are whatever they’re pretending to be. One time, there was this old lady whose husband died a long time ago. One of the shape shifters sensed this and decided to transform into a perfect replica of her husband. She followed the shape shifter, thinking it was really her husband and followed him all the way off a cliff and she died.
Shape shifters don’t die because they’re not really alive. They’re something in between. Something horrid. They kill for pleasure because they get board of everyday life.
They play tricks on your mind, but the only thing they can’t change is the distinct mark they have on the bottom of their feet.”
He stopped and drew an intricate symbol in the ground. “Memorize this symbol so if you ever suspect a shape shifter is trying to trick you then you can check for the sign! Don’t trust anyone!” he said with a serious look on his face.
The expression looked weird on his face, like it didn’t belong there. I wanted to make it go away. I quickly memorized the symbol and watched my brothers do the same. It wouldn’t be hard to remember, but I doubted I would ever need to use it.
“Got it?” Peter asked.
We all nodded, still too afraid to speak.
“Good! Let’s move on!” he smiled and started moving forward again.
After a couple of more minutes and Peter’s endless chatter the ground suddenly became all moss-like covered and squishy, but not wet. It felt kind of good to feel something squishy in between my toes. I was tired of walking.
A couple of yards ahead of us there was a giant willow tree. Peter held apart the curtain of leaves for us three to pass and as soon as we were through he walked to the huge trunk of the tree, which had a black metallic sort of look to it, and pulled out a small flute.
He played the loveliest tune I’d ever heard. It got higher and higher until the trunk of the tree started changing shape.
Suddenly there was a doorway and stairs leading down under the tree and Peter stopped playing. My eyes widened Peter started walking towards the entrance.
“Well come on, don’t be shy” he winked as he smiled at our frozen figures.
We started towards hole in the tree and walked down a wooden staircase. It was dark and had a musty woodsy smell.
We could see light ahead of us and when we got to it we entered a big room with a long wooden dining table with long wooden benches that all seemed to be made out of the same kind of black metallic wood. Everything was made out of wood. There were little oval holes carved out of the walls with something in them that looked like blankets and pillows.
I realized that those bubble-shaped holes must be the places where they slept. I wondered who they were, exactly. These lost boys. As if he was reading my mind Peter shouted “Oh lost boys!”
Silence, then the whole tree seemed to shake.
Boys started popping out from everywhere. I counted ten of them. They all looked similar to Peter. They all had tatters for clothes and had scars all over their skinny, underfed bodies. I immediately felt pity for these boys I had never met.
As soon as Peter was done introducing the ten lost boys he left them to play with John and Michael.
Peter turned to me, smiled, grabbed my hand and said “I want to show you something”.
I followed willingly and said “Um . . . okay?” I was still mystified by this boy but the curiosity overpowered the mystery. He led me back up the staircase and into daylight. . .

Grendel

In Socratic Seminar we read part of a novel called Grendel which is essentially Beowulf from Grendel's POV (hence the name of the novel: Grendel). The two chapters were very interesting and a lot more interesting, in my opinion, then the original novel. It was much also a lot easier to understand even though it was quite a bit more obscene. We had a discussion in class on whether or not the material in the book was appropriate for our class. Some people thought it was okay and some people did not. We decided that it was all how you personally took it, so it would be okay for some people, and not so okay for others. I personally think that it really wasn't that awful because it gives you a totally different point of view and a totally new aspect on the story which I think is a very good thing for a story. It expands it so much more and can expand your understanding.

Wednesday, September 3, 2008

Peter Pan from Wendy's POV

Okay so this story has gotten wildly out of hand and has ended up being a heck of a lot longer than I originally intended it to be (isn't that the way with most things?). Oh well, I'm going to post the first chapter of my story today and post a chapter a week until the story is done. Please comment if you notice any mistakes or if you just want to comment because I'd really appreciate it! Thanks!

Chapter 1

Night. The time of day where everything was quite. Finally. Sometimes I wished it would be this quiet when ever I wanted it to be. Taking care of two younger children with wild, noisy sprits could be exhausting. Mostly I just liked it because it was the time of day where I could think and dream, where I could live in my own fantasy world where anything I wanted to happen could happen.
I waited for sleep to come and consume me, but it wouldn’t. I was too agitated. There was a magic in the air tonight, so static and feral that it was almost tangible. Almost. I sat up against the dark mahogany headboard of my plush bed, propped my pillow up against my back, closed my eyes and tried to feel. My breathing got slower and quieter until it seemed like I wasn’t breathing at all. The magic grew more compelling, caressing my body, intoxicating me. My head swam; I was being drawn towards something . . .
A quiet creek from the windows’ hinges woke me from my reverie and I started as my eyes flew open. “Hello?” I squeaked. The long white satin curtains fluttered as a gust of wind flew in through the window. I shivered. I searched the room with my eyes and stopped at the mirror seeing a ghostly moonlit face with wide deep blue eyes staring back at me. She didn’t look anything like me in this moment, but she was me and I shivered again trying to forget what had just happened. I sank slowly back into my warm blanket and tried to sleep again.
Thunk. I jumped and gave a little gasp as I sat up. My body froze as I took in the image in front of me. A small crumpled boy was sitting on the floor doused in the moonlight crying. Why was he crying? He didn’t look like someone who would even be capable of crying. He had scars all over his darkly sun-tanned skin and had tatters for cloths which were clinging to his body in weird ways. His dark brown hair had leaves and twigs in it and looked like he had cut it himself, and with a jagged rock too! Despite all these facts, he was quite clean. I wondered why that was. It didn’t seem to fit with the rest of him. He looked like he should be filthy.
Was I dreaming? I didn’t know but what I did know was that I was curious. There was something about this boy, something about him that made him seem like he had popped right out of one of my story books that I loved to read. I shifted my body and kneeled on the bed while trying to make as little noise as possible, to not frighten the boy.
“Why are you crying?” My eyes widened as he lithely jumped up on his feet and turned to face me all in one swift movement. He tensed as if to attack and met my eyes with his bright blue gold-silver specked eyes and took in the surprised look on my face. As soon as he saw my expression he smiled and relaxed his position.
He folded his arms across his chest “I wasn’t crying” he said with a mischievous smile stretched across his face. I blinked. “What’s your name?” he said with a smirk. He was clearly enjoying my speechlessness.
“Uhhh . . . Wendy . . .” I breathed. “Who are you?”
“Peter. Peter Pan. Pleasure to meet you Wendy.” he smiled and bowed. He looked like he was mocking me. He straitened up his body. “Uh . . . well . . . now that I’ve got my shadow back . . .” he said sheepishly.
“Shadow?” I said, still in a daze. This must be a dream. It wasn’t making any sense.
He chuckled at my confused expression and said, “Never mind, I’ll just leave now . . .” he started walking towards the window balcony. He leapt up on the rail and looked back at me and frowned. “Unless . . . maybe . . .” he said torn between something that was unfathomable to me.
“What is it?” I said quietly, not wanting to wake my brothers. His face lit up and got that same mischievous look he wore the first time.
“Wanna go on an adventure?” he said as he jumped back off the rail.
Of course I did! This must have been the reason the magic was in the air tonight. I looked over at my brothers’ sleeping forms. I couldn’t just get up and leave them.
Peter must have read the expression in my face “. . . you know . . . you could bring them too if you wanted . . .”
I looked back at him and he smiled in encouragement. I swung my legs over the side of the bed, excited, “John, Michael wake up!” I said loud enough to awaken them. I flicked on the light switch and shook them gently.
“What’s going on?” John said in a sleepy voice as he rubbed his eyes and put on his glasses.
“Huh?” yawned Michael.
“We’re going on an adventure boys!” I said, still excited.
“What are you talking about?” said John, stretching his arms.
“Peter Pan is going to take us on an adventure!” I said and gestured to the boy standing in the window with his hands on his hips.
“Are you guys ready to fly? We’re going to Never Land where we can have fun all the time!” Peter said with his mischievous smile.
“Yah!” the boys said because as soon as they looked at Peter the immediately trusted him. He was like a magnet, you wanted to be around him and you wanted to do what he was doing. John and Michael, still in their night things, ran to either side of Peter. I cautiously walked forward and felt the wind push my nightgown against my body. I shivered again but kept on walking forward.
“Are you ready?” he said with ecstatic eyes. We all nodded, holding our breath, waiting . . .

Poems/Beowulf Bonfire

Hey guys! So what do you think about us memorizing poems and sharing them at the bonfire? I think it sounds way fun and exciting but unfortunately I won't even be able to go! I'm so sad! I really wish I could go because it would seem like it's going to be a very neat experience. You guys will just have to tell me what it's like when you get back. Leave your comments on what you think about memorizing poems for this thing and what you think about the bonfire. Thanks!

Thursday, August 28, 2008

I wish . . .

Okay so I wrote a poem because I was hideously board out of my mind and because I have to make two posts a week. I made a link to it because this blog is absolutly stupid and it doesn't look good if I put it on here so I put it on a different one and made a link to it so to veiw my poem just click on the link! Please leave your comments on what you think (on this blog)! Thanks!

http://celieshottspace.spaces.live.com/blog/cns!371B661622607D96!371.entry#trackback

Friday, August 22, 2008

Moonlight Dance

Okay so I wrote a song this summer and since songs are technically poems I'm pretty sure I can post this on here . . . plus I want to know if the lyrics are good enough to record so leave your comments or vote on the pole to the side and tell me what you think! Thanks!


Moonlight Dance

You’ve got my heart in headlock,
My head in a daze.
I’m dead when you’re not here.
I can’t feel.
I can’t breath.
In the dark of the night
It all comes crashing down.
When I don’t have to pretend
I’m not happy without you

Chorus:
See the silver lined cloud,
Feel the magic in your heart,
Hear the music in the air,
So shhh! don’t ruin the moment.

My heart aches for you,
Your fiery touch,
Your kiss of comfort,
Your arms wrapped around me,
Your hands to dry my tears.
You have my heart locked
Inside your secret box,
And the key: Under your captivity

Chorus

Bridge:
As my pulse beats faster
To match the tempo of the music
I can't help but think of you.
What would I do without you?
How could I live without you?
And whenever it rains I think of you,
Wondering if you’re thinking of me too.
Remembering how you promised me
That kiss in the rain.

Chorus

Thursday, August 21, 2008

Is it better for a book to make you FEEL something (emotions) or to be WELL WRITTEN?

My dad and I had a discussion like this in the car a while ago. We were talking about what's really a great book because I really didn't want to read the reading summer list because I thought they would all be really boring, either because I couldn't relate to them in any way at all or just because they were too complicated for me to understand at all.
I got on this huge tangent on how the Twilight Saga were my favorite books and they were good books to me because they made me FEEL emotions and I could totally relate to them even though I did agree with him that they were poorly written. My question was "Who cares if it's not the best written book in the world? Isn't it a good book if you can feel what the characters in the book are feeling?".
On the other hand I guess the generic stereotypical definition of a good book is biased on if it's well written. I CANNOT read something and get something out of it if I CANNOT relate to it. I get board and I zone out, then to me it's not a good book.

Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Why Bother With Socratic Seminar?

  • I should bother studying world history because it might help me later on in my life like if I want to be a world history teacher some day (which I doubt I will but whatever). Also I have to study for my tests so I can get good grades and get into a good college, plus it will make me smarter and seem more intelligent and could help me get a good job. You can never learn too much! Also you can use that information to look at what has happened in history and you can see the mistakes that other people made so you don't make the same mistakes.
  • I should bother studying literature because it will make me smarter and can help me expand on my vocabulary and ideas. Also literature can make you think and raise good questions that challenge your brain and it will also help you with college.
  • I should bother studying language arts because it can help me understand other cultures ( At least I think it does that? I'm not really sure what it is ). Again it will help me get more smart and obtain more knowlege.
  • I should bother studying geography because it shows me where different countries in the world are located which is a good thing to know. Also you can learn major landmarks like big mountain ranges and deserts and rainforests and things like that and that's important so if a teacher is talking about a specific country than you can know what the conditions are like there which can help with the understanding of that country.